I love how the embarrassment in the real world translates into one in the fantasy world! How the daydream is being influenced by what happens, and goes from a power trip out of boredom into something a bit more symbolic of recent events.
I really enjoyed it. I like the playful yet still mock serious nature of the daydreamed adventure, and the unique art style. I read the whole thing up to the part where it leaves off. I'd love to see what happens next!
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!